BoBsLogo Design Contest

Hello,
Please feel free to request for changes or refinement.
Thanks,
Mel

(This comment references Entry #5)

I really like the kid style in this one. I'm not sure about the hand though.

Could you maybe flatten the book out so that it is open and the "BoBs" sits on top of it?

Hi,
#7, #8 and #9 are versions with a flattened book.
Thank you,
Mel

#9 is my favorite. The "BoBs" portion is a little bit taller and I like that. I'm wondering though about the book. The "BoBs" portion of the image is slightly angled to the right could you do the same with the book? Also the gray outline of the pages looks a little out of place. It doesn't need to be straight, symmetrical and/or boring but maybe some more defined detail on the pages somehow....

Hello,
I changed the shape of the book on #9 with versions on #19, #20 and #21 and made the gray lighter on #20 and took it out on #21 for comparison. I also tried a gold look to the edge of the pages on #21.
Thanks for your reply,
Mel

I like 20. The detail you added was good. I'm still trying to decide if I like 19 or 20 better. But definitely a good revision.

Hi,
I placed and revised the book above "BoBs" on #39. Perhaps it has a better effect this way.
Regards,
Mel

Hello,
Here is a stylized version with the name also on it. #50
Thanks,
Mel