Not bad, but a little too "churchy". Plus all the fonts on #3 and #4 I feel like are very predictable in a church. The "BoBs" title itself is outside the box so I'm trying to think outside the box with everything else if that makes sense.
by the way - I teach religious school to 6th graders - so I could ask some of my students for input - however I am away next week at a business meeting and will not be able to respond as quickly as now.
Yeah that would actually be great. A good revision though on #10. I like the added detail. If you have anymore creative ideas I would love to see them.