What I like: 1) Good aggressive position of rider and bicycle. Really looks like he/she's riding; 2) Do like the 'washed out' feel to the sun; 3) Good use of black, green, gold;
Not so fond of: 2) Font of both BMX and Jamaica 2) I realize you probably didn't intend this, but the rider looks like a white kid (because of the color within the helmet). Can't work for Jamaica...