Bluebird CanyonLogo Design Contest

How about this one?
Please check, sir

Thanks

How about this one?
Please check, sir

Thanks

please check my latest entry, thanks!

Also, please avoid withdrawing previous versions as we may need to revisit.
Thanks.

Hi,
(I'm a female btw)
About to show my team the finalists before we reach a decision.
I think you're have a higher chance if you can make a version of one with the circle and one without.
Change the lines to as thin as possible.
To make both logo and type lighter weight.
Thank you.

Thank you sir. I am waiting for good news from you

Hi, just wanting to let you know your design is ranked 1 or 2 so far. I'm only moving you out of the top 5 to receive other designers' revisions:)

Thank you for the revisions! I will look at each one carefully:)

I have revised it as you want, I hope you want to see it, thank you!

LIKE THIS SIR?

How about this one?
Please check

Thanks

Haha, not a sir. Miss.
Yes, liking the flavor in the font. Logo lines can be thinner?
Like on #369

Like this, sir?
Please check

Thanks

Loving the new flavors you're adding to the typeface! Spoke to my team. Overall some wants to see the designs to look more feminine. So please use this feedback to your advantage as you see fit. I'll keep two versions for now, one with the 3/4 circle and one without. If you can adjust the beak to look least pointy or like a black triangle it might be even better! Thank you!

and entry #360 too sir, thank you!

I've revised. please check entry #357, thanks!

Love!
Would you like to make the font more minimalist, lighter weight and feminine?
Maybe erase some parts of the strokes.
Thank you!