#26,#27: Great! Thank you! The head/the blindfold is a bid to dominating now. Maybe you can reduce the hight between the letters and the eye and/or the "wave" to make it more elegant
Again, thanks for the helpful comments. #50, #51 and #52 reduced the blindfold size so as not to be dominant, adjusted the wave to make it more elegant also.
#50,#51,#52: I think you can reduce the blindfold size even more. I would be very glad if you could try. Please also try to solve the space between eyebrow and blindfold a bid different. It looks a bid - in German we would say unmotivaded, unfinished - that it should noe be there. Sorry, that I can not find an adjective which fits better. It is really hard to describe things like that in a foreign language. I hope you know what I want to say. Thank you! JUlia
Hi Julia, thanks again for the feedback. I will get back to my designs and will modify them based from your comments. As for the eye brows, yes I do think it gets in the way of the blindfold, I'll try to come up with a cleaner design.
#65, #66. Blindfold reduced even more, the eyebrow lines now follows the blindfold 'wave'. This should make the eyebrow less distracting as before and should make the design looks cleaner. Oh on #66, I've incorporated the criss-crossed pattern of your product.