# 23 & 24 just don't do anything for us, doesn't grab at us in anyway. # 25 we like, however its not what we are looking for. It looks more of a logo for a tatoo parlor, first impression when seeing it. Please keep trying we are open to all ideas. Greatly appreciate your effort!
Instead of the white looking like the shape of a heart, could you make it look like the words are etched on a rock? Like the red on black, real eye catching but would like to see a different design offset in the background.
Entry # 27 is the closest in the font area. We would like to see that font looking like it was blasted into maybe a rock/mountain with maybe a little blue sky above. Not sure if you can do that. Or maybe using a compressor as the back ground? Let me know if I need to clarify a bit more. Thank you.