OK, on entries 7 and 8 the S should look more like an S, but using a lightning bolt ensignia. These have one too many zig zags. Both ends of the S should be pointed. Also, try making Arcade - Laser Tag a bit bigger, as well as, It's all fun and games. I can't really tell how well the confetti is displayed, but it should be more than just a squiggly line. It also should have definition. Maybe also try adding some spiral type confetti.
Thanks.