I like the visual of Entry#12 the best so far. The colors pop and the parrot still stands out. The parrot itself is interesting and definitely has a "cool" factor - but I think he is a little too evil/ugly to place in the corner of a sign that may be going to a larger corporate account.
Thanks for the rank and feedback, okay I can revise it. Any other changes you would like to see? How about the colors? Is there any particular colors? If you have any thoughts please feel free to share it with me so I can visualize it for you
#12... I'll try to give you feedback without cramping your style because you are the creative one... I like the Macaw type of parrot. I've seen gray ones that still have a different color tail (the one I saw was red tailed but I more interested in how well it "pops"). There could also be some matching colors on the wings as long as it didn't distract from "black" parrot. Maybe just the tail and the stripe on top of the head... I'll leave it up to you. I like that your parrot is showing attitude and that has a little cartoon to it and isn't 100% realistic. That's unique. It would be really interesting to see what it would look like if the parrot was just landing on your "black Parrot" sign with its wings and tail spread. That might look very cool and allow for more colors to come into play.
#28 is cool but the parrot lost the "cool" factor. #12 had an edge to it that I liked but it didn't look like a parrot. #28 looks like a parrot but has no edge to it. I like that the font is recognizable on its own and the bird can stand on its own but I think the bird could be simpler and also regain the "cool" factor. I hope that helps.