Black Mint LicensingLogo Design Contest

Entry 24: I really like the mint leaf design which is striking. Can you please consider the following:

- Black and Mint are two separate words so there needs to be a space in between
- The colour distinction between the Black (black) and Mint (green) works well so could you try this
- Could you also use a brighter green (moving towards fluorescent)
- Try lower case text which I think makes it less aggressive and more inviting
- Can there be a version with the mint logo and square in front of the B, so the whole logo sits on one line and is more adaptable

Changes coming up!

Thank you

Hello, here are the changes to #24 that you requested. Please see entries #25, #26, and #27. If you need any further changes, please let me know.

Thanks for the amends. My comments would be (as revision to #25):

- The logo tends to look much stronger on top of the text so that is the preference.
- The green in #25-27 is too mirky so can you use the green from design #24 instead
- The lower case text needs to be bolder and thicker as it is quite meek as it is now
- There needs to be some space between "Black" and Mint" (all should remain in lower case)

Many thanks

Hello, here are the changes you requested for entry #25, please see entry #57.

Thanks for the revision. The font used is just not thick, modern or unique enough. I think using a thicker font will make it more masculine as the leaf is somewhat more feminine.

To give you font examples my original logo png included: jarah! I've also looked on freewarefonts.com and something like "Philadelphia" is along the lines of what could work (although this specific one may be too futuristic).

More font choices coming up!

Hello, here are the font changes you requested for entry #57, please see entries #62, #63, and #64.

With entry 62 can you try this with a more fluorescent green? I understand the potential print limitations but would like to see a version with the contrast with a fluro green and the black/silver.

Also, I have had feedback that the shape and positioning of the leaf in the square looks quite like the All Blacks New Zealand Rugby logo which I want to try to move away from. Can the shape of the leaf be altered or positioned differently to avoid these comparisons?

Thanks

I've changed the green color to a more fluorescent green. Regarding the leaf looking like the All Blacks New Zealand Rugby logo, I Googled the logo to see what it looks like, and I really don't see any resemblance other than that they're both leaves placed at a slant. I honestly don't think most people will look at these leaves and be reminded of the other one. Please see entries #102, #103 and #104.