How about trying this with dark blue and gold and possibly a different font...some upper case and some lower case. Thank you. Maybe black and gold and dark red and gold??
I like this black and gold...maybe you could figure out how to incorporate the color fading that you have in #25 into #30...possibly gold fading into black or Dark blue where the black is with gold fading into the dark blue? Maybe the fading could look like (gold) contrails coming from behind the jet going through the words??