Cool concept! I like the way you're emphasizing the name Birding Aboard in 20. And nice typeface.
What Diana is really looking for is a wordmark-style logo, similar to your Travel Bug News or Hope Harbor.
Can we see some variations on 20 with the words Birding and Aboard "side-by-side" and "stacked"? Maybe with the graphic integrated into the BA text, maybe in the "O" itself, and with the spyglass forming the crossbar of the "A"?
You get the idea ... not trying to break your concept which she really likes, or over-direct you here. Just some ideas.
And sorry, my mistake, the sub-text would be better if ordered "Binoculars and Cameras" versus the other way around.
Wow! Really nice interpretation of our last feedback on your new Entry 40!
That's a MUCH stronger wordmark-style logo.
I think you should focus on that one now and try some variations as you see fit.
Diana's comments are that it may be a bit too "formal" ... and she'd like to see some color, maybe only splashes, but some touches as accents? ... and the person should be older and not be in the water (that's a superstition among boaters!).
You obviously do better with only a "little help" from us! lol
So you show us what you think would be some nice builds on your Entry 40.
Thank you! Very nice! Going to rank this very high!
We just ended the contest early as Diana pretty much fell in love with the Tropicbird and binoculars submission from ibot. So I didn't want to waste any more of your time. I knew where she was going to end up. :-)
But she obviously really liked your ideas also and I wanted to thank you for the excellent effort and your really cool concept of the spyglass and perched bird!
GREAT work and hope to "see" you in another contest!
It's very rare..that the CH has the appreciation sense like this. And you are very kind too. No problem at all, if i'm not winning this contest. But i'm very by seeing your comment.