Thanks for your hard work, these are much better! Number 23 is a close contender. I'm not sure how to verbalize what exactly needs to change, but I think a couple of slight variations might help put you in the top spot. I really like the abstract visual of the pacifier and "B" logo , I had a couple of people look at your mock-up and they weren't sure what the purpose of the design was. Thank you again for listening to my feedback, you're really close on this!