I don't like the stars at either end of "Baptist Church" - would like to see these removed.
Would like to see the words "Baptist Church" have more emphasis because "Binbrook" is the name of the town and so we want to make prominent that we are a church. In other words, would like to see less variation in size between "Binbrook" and "Baptist Church".
For #10, the blue is too bright compared to the other colours. Also, the word "Binbrook" is still too large compared to "Baptist Church". Remove the bold from the word "Binbrook" and increase the size of "Baptist Church" so that it has the same overall width as the word "Binbook" (end of words line up vertically)
#41 has a more realistic window than #12 but it still doesn't accurately reflect the current windows like one of the other designers has captured. Also, #41 but with the cross moved to the left peak.