I really like the work you did for John F. Hanzel similar to this design.
I'm not super crazy about the roof and reflection into the 3 blocks of #38 and would like to see more ideas similar to what you did for Mr. Hanzel.
Try with block letters to the side as well as above.
maybe a different font. I kind of like the font of
#18, maybe try some with that more formal or old fashioned lettering. I like the W of #39.
Please try incorporating blue as well as the red. I think they compliment each other.
I really like your ideas so far.