Hi Bordo I like what you have done... I would like to see the emblems you have used in #22 and #25 in more of a circle rather then being pointy at the top. www.samudra.com.au shows the circular emblem style, it is orange in colour. As with colours I would like to see it in red and a gun metal grey and also red and deep burnt orange colour. I like the colours in #24 but maybe add a touch of red/orange as in www.bikramyogatoronto.com I also like Bikram spelt with a capital B rather then a lower case b. Entry #29 and #28 are not really the style I am after but thank you for giving me another option. Look forward to seeing you revised work. Thanks Stuart
Thanks Stuart for very helpful feedback! Here is new variation in more circle shape #38 I work now on new variations and soon as I finish, I will submit them.
Hi Bordo Thanks for submitting new variations. They look good, however is there any chance of seeing the emblems in #38 and #39 turned 90 degrees to the right so the opening of the circle faces Bikram Yoga to create more of a wave like effect? Can you please also submit with red and grey colours? Thanks Stuart
Hi Bordo Can you concentrate on #227. I want the words to be the focus not the emblem. So can you reduce the emblem size and then make the words bigger. Please keep the font the same however change the colours to red and grey. As with the emblem please change that to red and grey colours. The 'wave' under the swirl please make that the blue colour of the swirl and please use the blue of the wave in the words 'Scarborough Beach'. Thanks Stuart
Thanks for feedback Stuart! I can apply requested changes without problem, but in judging mode, only 1st ranked designer can submit new entires. So if you want to see my new submissions, you should temporary re-rank me on the 1st place, and soon as I finish submitting, you can rank as you wish. That is the only way.
Hi Bordo I have re-ranked you so can now accept your new entries thanks. I like the font and layout of the wording in #220 however would like to see the words in Red and Grey as in #221. Look forward to seeing the new variations. Thanks Stuart
Hi Bordo I am still waiting on your revised entries. In #227 can you please use the same font however make it larger so the emblem is not so dominant. I am wanting to make my decision very soon so look forward to seeing your work. Thanks again. Stuart
Thank you Stuart for feedback and sorry because I late with my reply. You can check new entries, and if you would like to see any other changes or variations, don't hesitate to ask .