#1 Thanks for being our first submission! We really appreciate the time and effort you have put into this entry. Things we like about it are; the colour of the text and the fonts used. Could you try making 'Liverpool Lane' bigger and making it fit underneath 'Bikram Yoga'? It would be helpful for us to also see Liverpool Lane in a more standard text. We like the concept of the character logo, but are looking for something a little less cartoony. We feel it looks a little bit like a Southpark character at the moment. We're not keen on the spear and would like it to look happy and inviting. We are also open to a logo without an Eskimo. Again, thank you for your efforts. We're looking forward to working with you further. :)
other thoughts visually complex - no clear iconography, needs to work as a black on white logo check out the clockingbird image posted with brief cheers :)
hey husk Ive just been going through your other entrys and I really like what I see. the ones that stand out to me is the "phonebox" "freelance for me"- i like the way you have use the letters to create a symbol. Which you could try with mine.
also the simple text and logos are my favourite i.e. - "Life Design" - I like the path which is in the heart , you could incorporate something like this in regards to liverpool lane.
"Capture Happy" - you could do something like this with simple text and maybe a simple outline of eskimo or penguin. thanks again for your entries
Hey the peguin is really cool. Can you try it like the capture happy. So simple text like our number one entry with over looking penguin may need body. Or maybe in the o of yoga but bigger.
cool stuff they keep getting better. we like the i drip of sweat. can you just bring a couple down the side instead. bikram is non religious and may come a cross as a Hindu Bind in the mid forehead. ;)
it is great how quick you are working on this. we really appriciate and love your designs. we like that your trying to convey the heat of the yoga. do you have any other idea. we would like to see the 13 design with no sweat at all just the feet. but also try one like the first sweat idea on the forehead but make it a flame what you think?
heres a no sweat version (no sweat - ha!) ... I'm working quick because I'm going away for the weekend! - I'll be back on monday though with fresh ideas ... cheers for now!
we would like to see the use of two LL as a letterform mark or incorporated into a logo. ie a L in the foreground and and another L in the back ground to form a lane way. stylised text not stand arial ... but needs to be easily read at a glance
we would like to see the use of two LL as a letterform mark or incorporated into a logo. ie a L in the foreground and and another L in the back ground to form a lane way. stylised text not stand arial ... but needs to be easily read at a glance
hey husk hope you had a great weekend away we are really desperate to see some thing completely different like your "rock angle hair" logo or "the giant group" logo
Hey we would like to see you do something completely different this vintage style is what we would like. especially the colours, focus on the L's and Lane way door check this link and keep clicking the image in the middle of the screen till you reach FOSSIL - INTERNAL MOTION GRAPHICS
Hi - I checked out the illustration you referenced - but I'm not exactly sure what you mean when you talk about the L's and a door ? - anyway ... here is my interpretation.
cool husk can you make the last box green and the first box blue to match the blue sweat and the flame more like a candle flame one solid outline and no trees infront of the sun. cheers mate
welcome back looks good man can you try this for me liverpool lane on top of image as the name with bikram/hot/yoga as sub text under image
also on a white background. try differnt stylised texts and like to see the whole image black and white. I guess id like to make sure the image and the text both work seperately.
i got it try 71 - swap liverpool lane into the blue bikram yoga text and colour (to the edges of the picture) and underneath bikram/hot/yoga in the black text