Beyond VelocityLogo Design Contest

Please see revised entries.

Thanks!

Lets work on a version using #228 as a starting point. I would like to suggest the following:

1.) On the original #171 I asked to soften the font. I liked the original font on #171 better than #228 but even #171 font I'd like to change to be "softer" - more rounded/professional/high tech (but not round).

2.) Raise the bigger letters "BV" so it is less hidden (sitting on top of the green arc?)

3.) Make the tagline gray.

Thanks !

sorry :)

Digiartz, I'm confused by your use of the letter "A" - shouldn't that be a "V"?

Hi,

Thanks for feedback. Please see revised entries and let me know if you want any changes.

Regards,
digiartz

This has potential. Can you soften the font, move the arc below the BV and reduce the size of the BV and the tagline?