Better BodiesLogo Design Contest

theyre just a little much for me. these seem more appropriate for gyms , muscle building etc. My services have nothing to with stuff like that. My services are the kind offered in medical spas that use various technologies to treat problem areas which remove fat , tighten , tone and sculpt. so maybe something a little less fitness model and little more subtle. My vision isnt necessarily of clearly drawn "people" or bodies..more a simple , yet creative design or shape thats convey the message of a contoured, shapely body. One that preferably can be incorporated in the name somehow. With the B’s. doesn’t have to be, its just one idea. Feel free to show me a few ideas .
and id also like to explore other layouts besides the circle concept. so basically all new ideas. lol

Simplified.

As I work in a body department just like you I decided to concentrate more on the bodies and I made second drawing. If you decide you want to proceed with either one please let me know and I can work on the layout.

ehh... we'll just have to be crafty ;-)

I will work over bodies and all. I like the black drawing you posted a lot. I didn't go this way just because you are from USA and naked bodies are usually no no in mainstream advertisement. They go into the sex category while here in Europe we see it more like an language of art.

maybe with the more sketched graphics we can make them into the "B"s?
But i dont like the font. less girly...more bold

youre right. as i was perusing the internet I found myself drawn to the abstract images..im liking the look of black sketch i uploaded with the man and woman back to back only because i think it depicts a contoured body, which is what i do, body contouring. I also like that images are more bold. the woman just needs to be un-sexified a bit and i dont think i like the angle of the two of them.
But I will be discussing these images with my partner later to get his feedback as well. but as of now, yes , i think im veering away from the average a little bit.

Thanks for your feedback. Yes this was initial sketch and I can work on it more to meet your expectations. It's before midnight here so I will post revisions tomorrow morning. Except for layout options would you like any change to the bodies in terms of athletic buildup, proportions or even "sexy component"? The examples you posted are very nice though exaggerated or stylized as opposed to average. Do you prefer drawing to go this way?

or what if the words/letters were written in black but highlighted with the same pink color?

youve come the closest so far to something I can work with. can we play around with this? can we try " Better Bodies" written above and below the circle , but still curved .and i think id like to "better bodies" and the other information that needs to be added, to be in color too. either the same color or another that may go with it.
type "Your body," left and center of circle. "just better" to the right and center of the circle.
Then Underneath it all written straight across and centered "Personalized Body Shaping"

Id also like to see the colors reversed. white or maybe beige backround
thanks