Better BodiesLogo Design Contest

You did, but you chose the business card design as a winner instead of the logo only design. Being that this is a logo contest site, only logo design entries are accepted as the winner. If you still want my design, you can choose #73 as a winner. I will upload the logo files here and once you approve those, we can move on to the business card design through email. ;)

Warmly, Andra

i thought i did this.

Please select the logo as the winner. Not the business card.

Great! I just uploaded the logo files. Once you approve those, we will continue with the business card design through email. Is the email from the business card a good email address to do this?

Let me know!

Warmly, Andra

Oh. Ok . No problem. I didn't know. Ok that's fine. Let's do it

Let's just work on the logo for now, as LT is a logo contest site, not a business card site and if you choose me as a winner we can further refine the business card through email.

Warmly, Andra

Here is the business card with the latest requested revisions. I only used one pink, the one that I also used for the logo, but it appears to be different because of the thickness of each element. The size of "personalized..." is 9,5 pt and the rest of the text (except the logo) is 9 pt. The size of the tagline is 5.55 pt.

Let's just work on the logo for now, as LT is a logo contest site, not a business card site and if you choose me as a winner we can further refine the business card through email.

Warmly, Andra

Hi mdmx24,

LT is for logos. This is a business card.

I'll let the project continue but the winner *must* be a logo only please.

You and Lifedrops can arrange after the contest to exchange files for the business card layout.

Kind Regards,
Ivan F
Admin

So I made a mock card..and here's what Id like to see. Using a 9point type face , Calabri style, let's center the text under a solid pink line. Center Specialized Services in black and put the 3 service in solid Pink, side by side separated by black bullets.
Then phone centered underneath. Email centered underneath that. Let's try that. If it works out, we should be good to go. Thanks

Also, if you could give me the name of the type faces used . That would be helpful

Can you make the phone number flush right? ( Move it all over so it ends over the .com of my email address)
Make the pink line and bullets solid pink. ( So they're the same color as bodies)
And can you tell me the point size of the information please ( including the " your body just better") it's hard to tell how big it is.
Thanks

Morning! :)

Here is the entry with all the requested changes: #86

Warmly, Andra

in hind sight..leave the leg alone as is so you can bring up "personalized body shaping " and give you more room to increase the point size of the text beneath it because it simply needs to be bigger. if you have to bring up the logo a smidgen to allow for more room...i believe you have a little wiggle room to do that as well.
however wide the new enlarged text comes out to be...increase the pink line to meet it. keep the left column flush left and the right colum (phone and email) flush right with the line.

"specialized services, Phone and email " Black and Colons in black bold

And make the rest of the info ( radiofrequency, ultrasound...number..email ) in black please.

and then the final thing is "your body just better" needs to be in black and something more legible. maybe try upper and lower case letters and a different font. its not very legible as-is. please do what yo ucan about that. thanks

okee doke. just a few more small things. if you could bring the girls right leg back down a smidgen..so it tapers a bit like it did before.

- please turn the dashes in front of the 3 services into pink bullets.
- make "personalized body shaping" black..maybe bold.
- "specialized services, Phone and email " Black and Colons after each one.
- remove quotes from my the phone number and email address

Here is the logo both on a white, as well as on a black background: #72 and #73. :)

I'm off to bed now.

'Till tomorrow!

Warmly, Andra

The logo on a white background.

The logo on a black background.

yup.

Not sure I understand what you mean. Do you want to see just the logo on a black background?

good. good. good. can i ask you a question? hypothetically, what would you create a logo for a black backround? dont worry about all the info. just the Betterbodies, your body just better and logo.

And here is this design on a business card: #57

Here is the design on a 3,5 x 2 in business card: #56

This vertical layout of the logo only fits this horizontal bussiness card layout. I will however scale it, so you can see for yourself. ;)

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please design this one to fit to scale please. a standard 2x3.5" inch business card w a little border

until then, its hard for me to determine the other changes i need to make. i need to see what this & #47 look like fit to scale


please make the right leg of the woman closer to the same length of the left one. it will give us a little more space and make the "B" look even more "B"-ish.

the problem here is this needs to be made to fit a standard 2x3.5" business card ( w a little margin). as is this image would need to be reduced to fit and would not be illegible.

just to add a little more color. can we try blocking out the "personalized body shaping" in pink ? and again. please remove quotes.

the problem for me is I cant tell how if its because I cant enlarge the image or if its the font of the text...but it seems so light.

wow, that second streak of pink really makes a difference! I love it. please remove quotes from "your body just better"

what if we kind of center the logo and put the rest of info underneath like before so we can make the text a little bigger and darker

Morning! :)

I made all the changes except for the tagline being on two rows in different colors, as I thought it would complicate the design too much. But I can also show you this if you won't be happy with the current italic version.

I searched among my 2000 fonts for a better font for "better" and I found a few new fonts I liked. If none of them is to your liking, I'd appreciate if you gave me an example of a font you'd like to see. I uploaded some of the new fonts in all 3 forms: black with pink outline, pink with black outline and just simple black, so you get an idea of each one of those 3 looks.

I also made all the changes for the other layout.

I'm here for your feedback.

Warmly, Andra

re: the above message, when you do this, i might wanna see you reverse the colors ..so "your body is pink" and "but better" is black?

and for this one, just for kicks, i would like to see "better" in the same scripts as "bodies" and with the other half of the woman pink as well.

orrrrrrr.....maybe try putting "your body" on the left side (under better) and leave "but better" on the right? that could work?

oh...well , tell ya what...maybe if you put that in italiacs and it looks good. that way...we can just get rid of the quotes

thank you ! looking forward to the changes!

That's not an "r". It's actually the exclamation mark with the quote. I will try to enlarge the space between them.

Services should be capitalized
both F's in fat freezing capitalized
get rid of "number" and capitalize P- in phone and make all the text in gray in darker

It's fine either way. No worries! :)

Personalized body shaping needs no quotes and to be darker.
and theres an extra R on the end of "your body just better that shouldnt be there.

ok. im just breaking down the changes for you so its not all in one giant message.

Sure thing!

also, is there any other fonts we can use for "BETTER" ? needs to pop a little more and be a little less blah.
try outlining the new black fonts in the pink . i wouldnt mind seeing the reverse too. (BETTER in pink, outlined in black)

Thank you for your feedback.So happy you like the design. I will have the revision ready tomorrow, as it's almost midnight at my end of the world. :)

Warmly, Andra

ok. so this is great, i can work with this. We just need to tweak a few things. we need to try making the B, look more like a B and less like the number 3. let trys making the the gray outline from the womans neck down pink. maybe get rid of the right breast all together.
after that, darken the rest of the gray area left a bit .see how that looks.

thanks. dont get me wrong, being a woman, i like your logo very much. But i need something less "girly/pretty" and more bold for my purposes. thank you.

I understand. I will have a new design ready tomorrow, following those guidelines.

Thank you for your feedback!

Warmly, Andra

i have attached a few pics that Id like you to work with. if the one with the man and woman.. the woman needs to be less provocative ...but thats a good idea for the sort of man/woman image id like. they dont have to be black. maybe the woman can be pink. or both.
and the beige woman i uploaded ...I like the color scheme and her look if we could make it somehow less sexy. also her body also looks like a" B" so thought maybe that could be a thing. But id probably still want a corresponding image like it in male form. Again, these are not exacts ...im just trying to give you guys a little more to work with because so far noones hitting the look and feel im going for. feel free to ask me any questions that may help. thank you