I really like this one. I still think you original design, 38, is a "classier" version. I'm just worried that he doesn't look enough "bee." It's interesting how introducing the white color, even just to his wings and eyes, really changes the impact of the logo. How does this one look with making the coffee cup just blue and brown (more like in 38, but without the saucer)? I wonder if that would align it a bit more with the look of 38? Thanks!
Thank you so much for your patience. We were able to ask a marketing friend of ours for an opinion yesterday. She really likes the design. (We all prefer the more "true blue" than the aqua.) For some reason, I still prefer the very first version you did of this, with the brown wings. I feel that it adds a bit of subtle sophistication while still having the "fun bee" that we are looking for. Would it be possible to use version 106, but add back in brown wings, and then also try a version with solid white wings rather than translucent? Feel free to change the mug/coffee to fit with the brown wings if you feel this looks better. Thanks so so much!
No, they aren`t the same. This blue is more on the turquoise side while the blue from #38 is on the blue side. I`ve submitted this same entry with the blue from #38 so you can compare them. The new entry is #106
Wonderful! This is it. Question on the blue color. Is this the same blue you used for 38? It is so hard to tell on different computer screens/phones etc.
I think this is THE one! It is between this one and 102. One more small revision request. Can you change these hearts to yellow? We will share this with a couple of friends and get their opinions between this and 102. Thanks!
Thanks for testing these. I agree that 92 and 95 offer the highest contrast. Question: 1. Could you take number 95 and change the lettering to blue, keeping everything else the same.
2. Could you take 95, change the lettering to blue, as well as the background on the inner circle. And then make his wings white, so they don't get lost?
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Okay, we are trying to narrow this all down. After thinking about it, we like this one better...without his butt/stinger. That said, can you outline the lettering on this one, like you did in 88? As it is now, it is a bit difficult to read if you are any distance away from it. Or if you have another idea to make it easier to read, please don't hesitate! Thanks,
Just curious, but if you had to pick one from this design serious, which would it be? Imagine this on a food tuck/van. So it will be pretty big...but it also needs to look good on the side of coffee cups, tee-shirts, etc...
OMG! Super creative! I really like all of these. Let me ask my partner and run it by my sister (she has a good eye for these things). Thanks so much for the quick turn around time. Love your work!!
I really like this one as well. A couple of variations I would like to see:
1. Eliminate the three lines on both sides of the word coffee and make the word coffee a bit bigger. Perhaps move the tag line 'Bringing the Buzz to you" outside of the circle, if necessary, for a bit more room.
2. Again, eliminate the three lines around the word coffee and move the coffee cup directly under "Bella Bee" and put the word "Coffee" below the coffee cup. Again, moving the tag line outside and underneath the circle.
I really love the personality of the bee in all three of these variations. He is adorable, with a little bit of attitude/sass. Perfect.
We really like this logo. Two small variations that would be great to see. Instead of the yellow teardrops in the brown border, could we see one version with small yellow hearts and one version with small bee silhouettes in yellow? (I like it as is, but just curious to see how the other two ideas would look.) Thanks!
Wow, these three updates look awesome!! I have a couple of small changes to request to see, but overall, I think these are just amazing! Will leave more feedback tomorrow when I have a bit more time. Thanks!!
Hi. My partner and I spoke and would like to see the following: 1. The font of this logo changed to the font you used for your logo in 2nd place.
2. We would like to see the lettering in white. I know this sounds odd, but white is VERY easy to read on a food truck, compared to brown or black.
3. If you google "Molly Moon's Ice Cream truck" you will have an idea of what we are envisioning. See how easy it is to read the word "Ice Cream?" Also, we are looking for a circular design...again, much like their cow and ice-cream cone. Perhaps the words "Bella Bee" around the top and "Coffee" around the bottom. We could add the tag line straight across, outside of the circle.
4. I like how you have stacked the bee and coffee cup in this logo. But I think the bee needs to be more personal...like the image I attached in the ideas/visual section. He can be in whatever position you think looks good. I had mentioned making his stripes orange...do you think this works with a brown outline of his body?
Hello! I'm really liking some of your ideas. :) My partner won't be available until later today, but we will give more feedback then. One thing I would love to see is a bee who has a bit more "life/personality". Something more in line with the bee rubber stamp image screenshot I attached as ideas. Does that make sense? Don't be afraid to include orange stripes on a bee like that...I don't think he has to stay yellow. Thanks!
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2. Could you take 95, change the lettering to blue, as well as the background on the inner circle. And then make his wings white, so they don't get lost?
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I added the lower part.
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I would vote either for this one (#41) or for entry with the hearts (#38).
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Here are the updated designs.
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1. Eliminate the three lines on both sides of the word coffee and make the word coffee a bit bigger. Perhaps move the tag line 'Bringing the Buzz to you" outside of the circle, if necessary, for a bit more room.
2. Again, eliminate the three lines around the word coffee and move the coffee cup directly under "Bella Bee" and put the word "Coffee" below the coffee cup. Again, moving the tag line outside and underneath the circle.
I really love the personality of the bee in all three of these variations. He is adorable, with a little bit of attitude/sass. Perfect.
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Here are the updated versions. If you`d like to see further revisions, just ask.
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2. We would like to see the lettering in white. I know this sounds odd, but white is VERY easy to read on a food truck, compared to brown or black.
3. If you google "Molly Moon's Ice Cream truck" you will have an idea of what we are envisioning. See how easy it is to read the word "Ice Cream?" Also, we are looking for a circular design...again, much like their cow and ice-cream cone. Perhaps the words "Bella Bee" around the top and "Coffee" around the bottom. We could add the tag line straight across, outside of the circle.
4. I like how you have stacked the bee and coffee cup in this logo. But I think the bee needs to be more personal...like the image I attached in the ideas/visual section. He can be in whatever position you think looks good. I had mentioned making his stripes orange...do you think this works with a brown outline of his body?
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