Hi Jhorbis - thanks for your design - you are the first, who think of the subtitle - Thank you! I also like the proportion of the pictorial and the lettering. Its only a bit too multicoloured - but I like your spirit to dare something else! Try to use only 2-3 maincolours and 1-2 further colours to give main points. Could you try also a pictorial which looks like handdrawn - as if its drawn with chalk or wax crayon. Do you know what I mean? It could be a flower, bird, even a pathway (into a better life).... I think you are capable to do something extraordinary. Have a nice day! Best regards, Sandra
Thanks Jhorbis, I will post my comments from now on on the Contest discussion, so that other designers can use my comments also. #20 + #21 remember me of yoga, which I do not want. I like the font of #21, but you can also try others. #23 shows a kind of "beginning" which I like but is still not exactly what I want. Just try a bit more. Thanks!
Hi Jhorbis, thanks for you new designs. We like #59 very much, just find the space between the two words a bit too large. And can you try the lettering in one colour (probably blue) and the bubbles (of the water) in one ore more colours. We are a little bit afraid how it will work for the print. Could you please make the lettering thicker? Thank you for participating again. We will extend the contest but are from Friday on away for a trip and not sure whether we will have access to the internet because its in the middle of nowhere in a huge forest where we give a seminar.