I was looking at it and the logo looks pretty balanced to be honest, and the more I would touch it, probably I would create more noise, even the fact you gave me direction to it helped a lot. And since this follows the initial idea with some awesome tweaks from you that made it look perfect I would let it stay as it´s.
Even tho I have submited black & white versions and also one on white background.
I like where this is going. The anchor tattoo makes me think Navy. Maybe a tattoo of a hop leaf or barley. The arrows take me away from the idea of beer. Maybe try a Mash Paddle. Google Mash Paddle for image reference. I like the glass of beer, but I'd also like to see a can, since this is focused on the marketing of cans.
I'm guess the letter to the right is supposed to be a C, but it looks like an E.
It looks like you are going for barley branches in the circle, maybe make them more pronounced.
Not sure what the thing is above the fist. Maybe try a beer tap.
Also think of the general idea of motion, so if the circle could imply motion somehow.
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I appreciate your updates.
I was looking at it and the logo looks pretty balanced to be honest, and the more I would touch it, probably I would create more noise, even the fact you gave me direction to it helped a lot. And since this follows the initial idea with some awesome tweaks from you that made it look perfect I would let it stay as it´s.
Even tho I have submited black & white versions and also one on white background.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Is there anything you feel it needs or is there any experimentation you would like to do?
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I appreciate your feedback as always.
Please check revisions and let me know your thoughts.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I prefer the font for Beer Canamation to all be the same size like you did in the earlier one.
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I appreciate your feedback on my logos.
Yes sure I can, please check revisions and let me know if it´s all okay.
Anything else you may need just let me know.
I will leave you my timezone bellow in case you need to check:
https://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I like this font better as well.
Could I see some options on font for the big B and Big C?
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Please check revision for your appreciation and let me know your thoughts: #51
I´ve submited a few others so you can compare as well.
As always feel free to ask if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly regards,
João
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Thanks.
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Hope you´re having a good rest night.
I´m sending revisions for your appreciation based on your great feedback.
Please check and let me know if its going in the direction you want.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I'm wondering what it would look like with more roundness on the fingers and wrist elements.
I'm still not liking the tattoo on the arm. It needs more roundness like the above hop element, but not necessarily the same one.
I don't think we need the grunge/noise elements on the outer rings.
The "Barley" elements curving up from "California" don't seem quite right. Barley has a more pointed tip to the grain.
Thank you for the great work you are doing.
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As always I appreciate your awesome feedback.
Submited revisions so you can compare.
If you need anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Forgot to mention my city and state. I'm in San Jose, California. Not sure I want to have that. Maybe just the state.
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https://www.northernbrewer.com/products/mash-paddle-doweled
And hop flowers more like this.
https://society6.com/product/beer-hops_print?sku=s6-8721217p4a1v2&c_kid=s6-8721217p4a1v2&utm_source=GOOGLE&utm_medium=cpc&campaign=%5BNB%5D_1027_US_%5BPLA%5D_Non_Product&adgroup=Wall+Art+-+Prints+-+NewPT&utm_term=PRODUCT_GROUP?tracking=search&g_acctid=700000001887878&g_campaign=%5BNB%5D_1027_US_%5BPLA%5D_Non_Product&g_campaignid=1425455186&g_adgroupid=102318099016&g_adid=439143246841&g_keyword=&g_keywordid=pla-829910970468&g_adtype=pla&g_merchantid=7992249&g_productchannel=online&g_productid=s6-8721217p4a1v2&g_partition=829910970468&g_network=g&g_ifproduct=product&g_ifcreative=&gclid=EAIaIQobChMIh5GV1IzC8AIVeTizAB0QyAPWEAQYAiABEgJge_D_BwE&gclsrc=aw.ds
Not loving the lines on the can.
Maybe the outer circles can be more like motion lines?
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Hope you´re having a great day.
Thank you for your great feedback, i´m happy you like my logo concept.
Submited a few revisions for your appreciation, please check and let me know what do you think.
Yes the thing above the fist is a beer tap, but I´ve change it to the hop leaf if that makes sense.
Can you tell me the city and state name?
If you need any more changes feel free to ask please.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I'm guess the letter to the right is supposed to be a C, but it looks like an E.
It looks like you are going for barley branches in the circle, maybe make them more pronounced.
Not sure what the thing is above the fist. Maybe try a beer tap.
Also think of the general idea of motion, so if the circle could imply motion somehow.
Great start. Thanks.