We really dig the bee in flight idea. The resizing of the bee you did to fit it into emblems was great, any chance we could see something where the bee is smaller and at more of an angle over the title. Could we see the dotted line connected to the line under the title? Maybe with one less loop so the bee doesn't look dizzy? We aren't keen on anything with an emblem behind it or around it with your design. We love how clean it is. Feel free to play with the wings and antennae though.
Dang it! Sorry. Really close. The patch by the tip of the wing is right on. But the inner one, by the body, should still be white. Make that one white, and the little strip that's surrounding it black. So there's a sort of alternation from the body out of white, black, white, black. I know it's nitpicky. Thanks for all your work so far.