Beauty Among BeautyLogo Design Contest

Could you reduce the tracking on Among please, and maybe put it in all lowercase?

Ok. I understand. But I didn't refer to a specific font, hand-drawn fonts are a pretty large category. And you would be filling the request of a potential client. A client that likes hand-drawn fonts regardless of who submits them.

Regarding the use of a hand font for "among" other competitor already used this option.
I do not think it is correct for me to use this feature you want as long as someone else has used it before me.
Honestly, I'm sorry.

Can I see this version with a white background instead of the grey. Also I would like to see how it would look with the overall height of the words equal to the height of the pictorial. So perhaps you could try putting "Among" in between the two "Beauty's" so that the overall height is extended? The font size for "Among" probably wouldn't need to increase much at all. Also could we see an identical variation as just described but with a different font altogether for "Among"? Specifically a more casual hand-drawn style of font. I like your vision much more than my partner so I'm asking for revisions in hope that they will make a difference. Thanks for your understanding.

So after discussing this with my partner she doesn't like the look of the pictorial within the text. She prefers it the original way such as #92. However we're both uneasy with the overall proportion with 92. It seems to tall and could be cumbersome with a business card layout of as a header for a website's main top navigation. So we'd like to see a version similar to 92, just make the pictorial smaller in size.

Thank you for the comments.
I am still waiting and others.

I'm sorry, I meant to say I still prefer the type of 92.

It's difficult to discern with my viewing device what the difference is between design 93 verses 94. But I think 94 is a more bold type? Regardless I still prefer the type of 93.

Yes, I like this much better. You followed my suggestions perfectly, thank you. In an effort to reduce the overall height of the logo as well as an aesthetic change, I I wonder how it would look with your illustration placed in the middle of Beauty Among Beauty? In other words the name dissecting the figure at roughly the waist. With or without the four corner brackets. And the slogan still at the bottom? I'm not suggesting this would be an improvement necessarily, just that I would like to see the variations so that I could make a better judgment.

Your image submission #62 caught my eye because I like the nude as framed within what could be interpreted as camera’s focus screen frame marks. However I’d like to see the illustration without the drawing that delineates the inner thighs from her torso. I feel as it stands now the figure is too erotic, yet clearly still beautiful if it were omitted.
Also I’m not crazy about the fonts used for the title or slogan. Because the slogan is correctly presented in a smaller font size, I feel its readability is especially important. So I’d like to see it in something closer to a reading font. All lowercase is fine or as in the way you presented it. The title font seems a little too bold and I think such a heavy weighted font works against communicating the sensual, refined nature of a beauty among a landscape. More to the point, I’d like to see a middle weight font…a light weight font might not be appropriate for a title or product name. Additionally, since the word “Among” is a preposition in the name; I’d like to see it with slightly less emphasis than the two “Beauties”. It could be a slightly smaller font size, a different font altogether (even a script or hand-drawn font), or a lighter weight font. So there’s a few suggestions to explore. Good luck!