Entry 28:
Hello Jim,thank you for your good efforts!
I believe this logo is for me too serious and not obvious enough on the first sight. I need people to be able to see from the first view what the logo means,what we want to show and I need the clients to get THE great impression right away. With this I needed to take some time to figure out what it meant and that's why it wont be appropriate for my business.Also I dont really like the writing style,same as in the other two logos.If you have time to do more,I'd really apreciate a logo with more softer colours,a different,more friendly writing style and a different drawing.