Bays and ClaysLogo Design Contest

From my point, there is nothing further to tweak.
All elements are well balanced and all changes you wanted so far are applied.
Let me know if you need anything else or have any other concerns.

Kind regards,
Bob.

Looks great! All I can ask at this point is step back from it for a bit and then look at it with fresh eyes and make sure there is nothing you want to tweak.

OK...like this!?...#62

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If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!

you will notice the reel handle simply sticks up just inside the rim of the spool and there is a counterweight 180 deg from reel handle. I understand de-featuring for logo purposes, but you may be able to achieve the more modern look on the real.

This is looking really good. Try to modernize reel (I uploaded new pics see orvisReel and allenReel). Add a line to represent rod end guide ( i uploaded new pic of this as well)

See if you can modernize reel. I uploaded a pic of an Orvis reel and a pic of an allen reel

Add line to represent guide at the end of flyrod. I uploaded a pic of actual rod end guide

Hello!
Here are the changes you requested....#61.
Thanks again,
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!

Maybe getting too picky, but line comes off the bottom of a fly reel (see attempt at mark-up). Take a look at the fly pictures I uploaded, seaducer and clouser. A silhouette of one of these flies may be more attactive on the logo. Also, borrowing from the other design move the fly and do something with the line ( see feeble attempt at mark-up) don't let the line/rod go past the current right side of the shotbun.

I'm sure you can be more creative with line here.

Fly here, seaducer rides hook down, couser rides hook up

Hello!
Thanks again!
Here are the changes you requested..."Clays" in white ...#60.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

Let's go back to the word clays in white. LLC on the gun stock is good. Darker gray for gun and flyrod is good.

Thanks!

Hello!
Thanks again for the all comments!
Here are the changes you requested #55, #56, #57, #58, #59.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

work the clay target with the word "and" into this desgin. Ok for clay to cut into part of the Words Bays/Clays. I like the vertical spacing of the fish, bays, clays

Let's go back to centering up Clays, drop the comma, move LLC to gun stock in a smoother font. I have a few comments from family about the gun and flyrod needing to be more visible, also, would love to see a version with the white part of the clay in orange

Hello!
Thanks again for the comment!
Here are the changes you requested...different "and" font #50, #51, #52.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

change font of the word "and" and make "and gray.

Hello!
Thanks again for the all comments!
Here are the changes you requested #41 .
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

Hello!
Thanks again for the all comments!
Here are the changes you requested #37.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

just noticed that tail on new fish is different, may work without cutting path through tail for "shotgun instruction"

in other words put "shotgun instruction" centered 180 degrees from "fly fishing charters"

Change to new fish, change to new fly, drop & symbol in front of shotgun, bring instruction to normal spacing next to shotgun with cut path through tail

...and here are new options with saltwater fly and new redfish head...#33, #34.
Thanks again!
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

...and here's option with Texas shape...#32...

Hello!
Thanks again for the comments!
Here are the changes you requested....CLAYS, LLC...#31...

Also, if we end up going with this design, i may want to change the fly to a saltwater fly, and maybe switch to a silhouette where the head looks more like a redfish with the underslung mouth

looks good, maybe drop the 2020 and move LLC to the S in clays, with the LLC being in much smaller font than the word clays.... CLAYS, LLC

Hello!
...and here are new slogan placement...#29, #30.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

Hello!
...and here are new options #23, #24.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

Hello!
Here are new options #18, #19, #20, #21.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

Hello!
Thanks for the all comments!
Here are the changes you requested #9, #10, #11, #12, #13, #14.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

company will be LLC in 2020. Changed slogan to "Fly Fishing Charters and Shotgun Instruction. Would also like to see without slogan.
Fish should be redfish. The redfish, or red drum is the predominant species pursued with the flyrod on the texas coast. Same comments for all submissions.

company will be LLC in 2020. Changed slogan to "Fly Fishing Charters and Shotgun Instruction. Would also like to see without slogan.
Fish should be redfish. The redfish, or red drum is the predominant species pursued with the flyrod on the texas coast. Same comments for all submissions.

company will be LLC in 2020. Changed slogan to "Fly Fishing Charters and Shotgun Instruction. Would also like to see without slogan.
Fish should be redfish. The redfish, or red drum is the predominant species pursued with the flyrod on the texas coast. Same comments for all submissions.

company will be LLC in 2020. Changed slogan to "Fly Fishing Charters and Shotgun Instruction. Would also like to see without slogan.
Fish should be redfish. The redfish, or red drum is the predominant species pursued with the flyrod on the texas coast. Same comments for all submissions.

Hello!
Here are new options #5, #6.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.
Kind regards!
Bob.

Hello!
...and here's option with gray-white background...#4.
If there's any other options you would like to see,please let me know.

Kind regards,
Bob.

Hello!
Here's first option...#3.
Any feedback is welcome!
Best regards,
Bob.