I don’t want to drive you crazy. It’s simple ... just take the 2 new color designs and see how they look with the fonts and type on this one. Send as many samples as you like, but keep this type design. Just create a little more space and simplicity with the colors. I’ll look tomorrow. Need to decide soon.
maybe the identical swoosh but smaller? I don't know but I have faith that you'll figure it out. Men have to feel it is simple and direct, clean and neat. Yet I want to keep the design you have so it's up to you now.
this is still the original pick and the colorful swoosh of colors and right look and feel. As I said in the earlier post, the new designs are heavy and solid, lost the original appeal
Keep the same colorful swoosh but create space and elegance around it somehow so not one says it's too busy.
I think you misunderstood. I didn't want to change the swoosh of colors. We're looking to communicate optimism, hope, and joy. You did that with the lighter design with the teals and blues.
This one feels heavy with the more solid colors. Your original was more whimsical and free. So I'm dragging both of these away.
What I want by simplicity is perhaps more white space btwn colors and print, perhaps playing with the size of the colors but keeping the original splash of color. Does that make sense?
OK, coming down to the wire. And you're still first choice. However, some tweaking necessary.
First, thank you for the new versions but we decided they don't work as well as what you did on this one. So this is our design favorite.
I need one tweak but be careful to keep the same look and feel.
I need to appeal to men as well as women. And comments from men were that it's too busy and one even said unprofessional. Duh, I disagree.
Can you send me 2-3 versions where the colorful swoosh design and the fonts etc. are the same, but do something to create more white space, more simplicity? It needs to be elegant yet simple. the men are right that there's a lot going on here. How can you keep the same design and yet simplify?
good, can we also have one with 'BAY AREA" less spread out
and Hypnotherapy not as bold. I want the tag line to catch the eye, but still be in the print you have.
WILL THIS LOOK CLEAN -- with a clear background, regardless of medium I put it on? When I posted to FB you could see what looks like a gray smudge in back of the print
Hi Liliya
I'm back! Just got off the phone with my friend Peter. I now have 3 finalists and will send out a survey.
But first, I'd like to see 2more versions from you.
On this one, could you please make the tag line the darkest orange/red in the color design? And bold enough to stand out. We both thought it's too light and seems to trail off toward the right -- please make it consistent and bolder.
You could also send a version same way but with one of the darker blues
Thanks for all the samples. I’ll be getting back. I have a marketing/advertiser friend advising me. He thinks very highly FB your work. Just need to nail the tag line font/color now
So far your's is getting the best buzz from friends and I like it best. I'm still waiting for you to give me an example of one with the tag line "Love Your Life Again" beneath -- important so thanks, love your work
Maybe "Love Your Life Again" can be in the same bold black color of "Bay Area" but with a colored line beneath, perhaps the darker teal in the color image? Let's try a couple of different ways to go. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
black letters too cold, needs to communicate warmth, caring, inspiration -- getting from her to there. Tag line needs to be there "Love Your Life Again"
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Show me this style swoosh with the same font and type style that you set up on the one I ranked number one
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Keep the same colorful swoosh but create space and elegance around it somehow so not one says it's too busy.
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This one feels heavy with the more solid colors. Your original was more whimsical and free. So I'm dragging both of these away.
What I want by simplicity is perhaps more white space btwn colors and print, perhaps playing with the size of the colors but keeping the original splash of color. Does that make sense?
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First, thank you for the new versions but we decided they don't work as well as what you did on this one. So this is our design favorite.
I need one tweak but be careful to keep the same look and feel.
I need to appeal to men as well as women. And comments from men were that it's too busy and one even said unprofessional. Duh, I disagree.
Can you send me 2-3 versions where the colorful swoosh design and the fonts etc. are the same, but do something to create more white space, more simplicity? It needs to be elegant yet simple. the men are right that there's a lot going on here. How can you keep the same design and yet simplify?
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and Hypnotherapy not as bold. I want the tag line to catch the eye, but still be in the print you have.
WILL THIS LOOK CLEAN -- with a clear background, regardless of medium I put it on? When I posted to FB you could see what looks like a gray smudge in back of the print
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Thank you for all of these.
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1) darker, bolder orange/red
2) darker, bolder blue/gray
or whatever you think is eye catching
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I'm back! Just got off the phone with my friend Peter. I now have 3 finalists and will send out a survey.
But first, I'd like to see 2more versions from you.
On this one, could you please make the tag line the darkest orange/red in the color design? And bold enough to stand out. We both thought it's too light and seems to trail off toward the right -- please make it consistent and bolder.
You could also send a version same way but with one of the darker blues
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Can you send this font tag line back with samples using the colors already in “Bay Area” and “Hypnotherapy” please
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doesn't really say bay area to me
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