I received a few other comments from people who thought it was the front-runner, but one person (who is a designer) said the sun doesn't add anything to it as drawn; rather it is a distraction. My original Logo was just a running Guy, but I changed the Tag Line, which along with the sun kind-of symbolizes re-birth, or re-vitalization, so I don't want to lose that element entirely. What about a horizon line at about chest height, with the sun (on the right) half-risen? You already have that depth thing going.
Could you play with colour, or the text using that line somehow??
I keep looking at that mouth, and wonder if just a line would be simpler and easier to "see."
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Could you play with colour, or the text using that line somehow??
I keep looking at that mouth, and wonder if just a line would be simpler and easier to "see."