So far, your graphic looks the best, but we definitely want to see the name text to the right of the graphic. Would also suggest you make the lighthouse very simple; easy to print or embroider on shirts, hats, etc. Show us the current graphic to the Left of the text as one version. Then make the graphic a little more narrow so that we can see what that looks like. Thank you.
See if you can make the lighthouse look more like a lighthouse . . possibly making it not as wide? maybe use diagonal stripes instead of windows as other designer did? Is it possible to make the plus a slight bit longer on bottom to look more like a cross (a very subtle tweak)? Definitely like your fonts, placement, spacing, etc. Specificly in the one I have ranked #1, I like the way "Bible Church" is indented under the "A" in Barnsboro instead of the "B" . . it allows room for the base of the graphic. You did not do that in #26 and #27, so please send me a couple versions of #28 with the comments I made above. Thank you.
#48 is looking good. Please make the following changes: 1) make the thing at the top that appears to emit the light look more like a religious cross, where bottom is longer than top, etc. 2) you currently have 4 white stripes on lighthouse, change it to only 2 white stripes that will make the stripes wider and give it a simpler look. 3) then show me a version of that with windows and one without windows. Again, I apologize for being picky but your entries are the closest to what I have in my mind for our new logo. Thank you.
Thank you again. I will submit revisions within hour. That is really not problem so please don't hesitate to ask for next versions. Best regards Sebastian
Really looking good now, however can you tell me what the differences are between #54 and #55? Likewise, how are #53 and #56 different? I am focusing on #54 and the only tweak I would like to see for now would be to see how it would look if you made the arc underneath the lighthouse just a little bit shorter, like 10% or 20%, so that the arc isn't as close to the "B" in Bible. Otherwise, we'll wait til the next phase of the contest. Great job. Thank you.
We are nearing the end of our contest and I am pretty much deciding between your #72 and the other guy's #107. I showed these to others at the church and they like yours, but they don't like the halo around the top of the lighthouse. Can you show us a couple versions where you 1) remove the halo, 2) make the cross at the top of the lighthouse look like a distinct cross with sharp 90 degree angles and a base that is longer than the top of the cross; otherwise it looks more like a "+" sign and 3) let us see it with a double arc with one light and one dark arc. Keep the arcs from getting too close to the word "Bible." Thank you.
Please let us see #72 with just the removal of the Halo and a sharper looking cross; only. Then show that version with the cross in the light blue as you have it . . and a second version with the cross in dark blue. Then take those and try adding the double arc as stated in #3 above. I may still like the single arc so I want to see these versions before I make our final decision. Thank you.
Here are new versions: #118 #119 #120 As regarding double arcs in #107 I would like not to copy elements from other designers as it's against the rules of logotournament. But please don't hesitate to ask me to develope my design in any other way. I will be happy to help you. Kindly regards Sebastian