Play around with different fonts- something playful or a handwritten look. also condense text, not so much space between lettering. also barbell can be shorter. Only the good stuff needs to be brighter..it is hard to read. try other color combos too. thanks
like the overall look and more dimension in the text. Not loving the green color, try some other bright colors with a muted color background. Can try more than one color of text too. thanks
Will you try less blocky font, something more fluid, yet not cursive. Also blue/green colors?? something that says..Fun, fresh, healthy... like the black barbell, but needs more color dimension in print. Thanks
I'm interested in the ball shapes. Please change colors from pink barbell to black barbell, and the Barbell Bakery to Pink and maybe blue. Make Bakery more visible, and play around with different fonts.
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thanks for your feedback, let me know if you need a change.
best,
ndaru
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