Hello. OK, my partner thinks that two stars is too much. Upon review, I tend to agree. Since we will use the BR standing alone with the name, we want to keep the star there. Let's put a "Est. 2017" at the bottom center in place of the star there.
This is the one. And #60 revised with this BR/Star will be the combination. One thing to consider as a final element if it doesn't get too busy. This beef will come from Idaho. So the valleys are surrounded by mountains. Don't change a thing about anything else. But can we tweak your pasture to be one that is at the base of mountains?
To confirm, it was not J3rry's idea. A star element had been in the brief from the beginning. That fact this it is a Kosher label should have indicated any star included would be that particular star. Thanks.
Hi again,
Thank you for the quick update!
However, I'm still waiting for permission from J3RRY if he'd allow me to use the star of David element. I believe it was his idea from the beginning?
Will upload revisions the soonest once I get a response.
Thank you for your patience,
-Wendy
Hi again,
Please review #63 and #64.
With regards to the star of David element, please correct me if I believe it was the other designer's idea. I have to ask permission from him first once he gets online, before I can start using it.
Thank you for understanding!
Consolidated notes: 1 - Fix the star & make slightly bigger; 2 - Incorporate the BR in to the shield somehow; Confirm font same as 60. Thought: Might get a little busy... consider getting rid of the sun ray lines?
In looking at the other one, I think I like the steer back on top, so you can get the "Premium..." in there. Is there a way to get the branding mark in to that one? Sorry to confuse.
Big fan of this and the #62. Would like to make them interchangeable. Figure this out and I think we have a winner. No need for "Kosher" on this one. Just fix the star. Need the "Premium Kosher Beef" on the shield (#62 version). Thanks!
Hello. Really liking this. You need to google "star of David." Your angles on the star you chose are wrong. Sounds like a small thing, but it's important. Thanks!
I like your direction and incorporation of elements. Couple of things: Star needs to be a 6-pointed star. Change MEATS to BEEF. Main font is a little too squared/harsh for my tastes. I like the attempt to stay masculine, can you offer something that would be unique enough to stand alone and people would still recognize it as the logo? Thanks!
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Please review #118 #119 #120 for revised options.
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I'd improve on this entry.
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Please check #93 to #96 for revisions. Hoping they're in the right direction.
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I just saw these suggestions.
I'd work on it.
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#88 has the normal star and #89 is it's zoomed in look.
Thanks for keeping up!
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Please check #86 #87 for new options.
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Thank you for clarifying!
Please review #67 #68 #69 #70 for revisions.
Best regards,
-Wendy
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Thank you for the quick update!
However, I'm still waiting for permission from J3RRY if he'd allow me to use the star of David element. I believe it was his idea from the beginning?
Will upload revisions the soonest once I get a response.
Thank you for your patience,
-Wendy
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Please review #63 and #64.
With regards to the star of David element, please correct me if I believe it was the other designer's idea. I have to ask permission from him first once he gets online, before I can start using it.
Thank you for understanding!
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Thanks for the feedback,
I'd also comply with these :)
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I'd comply with these suggestions.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Please check #54 #59 to #62.
Hopefully you mean like an iron mark type for a stand alone version.
Thanks for the detailed feedback!
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