I'm concerned that these leaves are too scattered and the tree looks like it is dying .... could represent that the company is falling apart or dying....
It is a beautiful tree, but i am starting to worry about the link to the company.
i have choose three color for tagline,
because the reason of the leaf,
it mean something, that the children, teens, and young adults, is a part of a big tree, the tagline color is same with leaf color,
I'm really liking the navy blue lettering for Ballard Clinic.
Would we make it a little less busy by choosing one color (maybe green?) for the words underneath?
Just a minor tweak - could you large remove aqua leaf above the A? Also, could you try changing the color of the word "Clinic" to be the same navy blue?
Thanks.
I am really liking this one the best thus far! Instead of brown leaves, can you add some blue? The aqua blue in the word "teens" seems out of place if no aqua anywhere else...
I really like this! Can you try placing this color option tree on the Right side of the name...so the leaves are blowing on Ballard Clinic.
In addition, could you consider doing an option with the tree on the left side but the wind blowing the leaves towards the right?
Would you also consider adding a few aqua blue leaves?
When we poll our friends/family, they all are drawn to your logo. However, in follow up discussions, we discuss whether it looks too dark, mysterious, and slightly like it is dying? Do you have ideas of how we can adjust it?
The more i look at this tree as well as the others, i'm starting to worry that it looks a little too mysterious and not approachable, youthful enough. Any adjustments you could make?
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It is a beautiful tree, but i am starting to worry about the link to the company.
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still same dot as
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im just telling my reason behind that,
please dont hesitate to asking me if you want any tweak
best regards
HerDish
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i have choose three color for tagline,
because the reason of the leaf,
it mean something, that the children, teens, and young adults, is a part of a big tree, the tagline color is same with leaf color,
my kinds regards
HerDish
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Would we make it a little less busy by choosing one color (maybe green?) for the words underneath?
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and another color of clinic word
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please let me know sir if you need anything to tweak
best regards
HerDish
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Thanks.
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keep the tree with brown
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#110 #111 - tree in brown and text in navy
text little bigger - #112 #113 you can see text bigger and tree smaller,
best regards
HerDish
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editing entry #89 as per request
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i smaller the text a little bit,
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In addition, could you consider doing an option with the tree on the left side but the wind blowing the leaves towards the right?
Would you also consider adding a few aqua blue leaves?
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here an update
combining entry #75 and #9
and with color treatment
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will try another ideas also,
please let me know if you need to tweak
best regards
HerDish
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regenerating tree