Ok, I'm sorry to say that I'm going to go in the other direction. The reason is that I put out a survey with my top few choices and I had a lot of comments come back that people thought this could be conceived as a bakery for petfood, which I am not. That said, I absolutely love your design and I am sad to tell you I'm going in the other direction.
I have some other projects I would like to work on, including building a website for this business and making labels for my products. Perhaps we can work together in that capacity? I think you're extremely talented. If this interests you, please email me at bakedbycorinne@gmail.com
The pink stands out a bit too much, but I left feedback on another one of your entries. I like this version of the circle but let's try it in the green color.
Can you try a different font for the Red Bank - or use lower case rather than capitals for everything except R and B (and NJ)? I like the style of this a lot. And let's try it with and without a circle, but I think the circle should be either the blue or the green. The pink stands out a bit too much. Maybe we just make that the green color too?
I may want the font of baking a difference to be a different one, and I'm open to either Red Bank, New Jersey or Red Bank, NJ - depending on what looks better stylistically.
Please see #196 for comments. I like this color scheme and have asked for a few small changes. Please note that the name of the town is Red Bank as opposed to Ren Bank. :)
Another idea I'd like to see is bringing in a circular element by curving the text at the bottom as well so that the slogan and location sort of form the circle.
can I see a version of this where baking a difference is on top and red bank, NJ is on bottom? Let's keep the structure of the image the same, but swap out a small heart for the leaf in the I and change the green to more of a turquoise or pink but keep the dark blue.
I also really like the version that is enclosd in the circle, as you've done in #156, but so that I'm not leaving comments on every design, I'll leave that comment here, because I may want to include that.
In addition to the feedback above, I am a little concerned that the word "by" is missed. I wonder if that would look ok between Baked and Corinne, creating a bit more space between those two words... kind of in place of the leaf over the eye. The design has a ton of potential but I don't love the green shade here.
I really like your style and your designs have tremendous potential for me. I do think there are a few too many elements at work though. Can we remove the leaf over the I in Corinne, try the slogan of "baking a difference" in lowercase, and work with fonts in the sea foam and white or pink color scheme?I like the cat ears and the tail. Not sure we need the rolling pin. Maybe a little heart, either where the rolling pin?
hi, thanks so much for feed back and the rating, i've submitting new variations, you can check it please? if you like it please give some feed back, :)
This is really cute... Can you try to offer something circular in design... maybe with the baking a difference slogan as the bottom portion of the circle? Can we downplay the cat a bit?
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I have some other projects I would like to work on, including building a website for this business and making labels for my products. Perhaps we can work together in that capacity? I think you're extremely talented. If this interests you, please email me at bakedbycorinne@gmail.com
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In addition to the feedback above, I am a little concerned that the word "by" is missed. I wonder if that would look ok between Baked and Corinne, creating a bit more space between those two words... kind of in place of the leaf over the eye. The design has a ton of potential but I don't love the green shade here.
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Noah :)
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