Baggage Breakers CoachingLogo Design Contest

Hi Jayrol,

Thanks for feedback, how about this update #193?

Regards,
Jefry

The line spacing on the tag line could be increased a bit

Hi Jayrol,

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #186 and #187, let me know your thoughts

Regards,
Jefry

Can this be modified a bit? The gray text is too light. Perhaps the Baggage Breakers is a dark gray or black and sprinkle in the green and blue?

Greetings...

I submitted several new design proposals, I am open to receiving feedback. Each designer has a limit for submitting new proposals, if you are interested in my design, you can give a rank. So I can keep updating and developing my proposals. Your feedback and ranking really helped develop my proposal in your contest.

Regards,
Jefry