thanks for adding the coffee, we're not convinced of its placement tough. Maybe scale down the B.Y.O.D. to let the cup shine a bit more or something like that?
Definitely prefer this background - can we maybe add another, more iconic building/structure (Chrysler building, Brooklyn Bridge).
We'd also prefer the dog to have a less pointy snout
More details on NYC. Your second request is hard to implement with current layout as dogs head is higher than his back so putting him in front of the city would caver it while exposing empty space in the back.
Thanks for your feedback. For now I made revisions in black&white to make it easier for you to compare.
I'm not sure what you mean by cleaner lines for the city - do you want even less detail or something quite different?
same for this one- We like the idea of this layout/design, but we don't like the font used for B.Y.O.D.- it is too loopy for our taste. Maybe a little cleaner lines for the city as well?
We like the idea of this layout/design, but we don't like the font used for B.Y.O.D.- it is too loopy for our taste. Maybe a little cleaner lines for the city as well?
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We'd also prefer the dog to have a less pointy snout
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I'm not sure what you mean by cleaner lines for the city - do you want even less detail or something quite different?
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we appreciate your quick response!
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thank you!