Hi, here are the revisions you requested: one solid version, one with a bit of web 2.0 look of the text (This comment references Entry #56) and one with bolder speed lines /wings #57. Any suggestions?
The alignment of the "head" versus the body should change. As I see it, the head is forward of the torso, I would like to see the alignment of the head and torso in a normal anatomic position, even if you must tip the figure forward to keep the sense of motion. A nice design.