Good morning Bret,
I have uploaded the revisions #309
about dot placement because letter T have more space if i changes it will be change all. so i do as i can.
what do you think?
OK I wanna work on final revisions so that I can choose the winner and move forward with obtaining the logo and then start working on new projects.
The dot next to the letter E Is further away than the other 3 dots so I'd like to move it equal distance from the letter E.
Can we also slightly thicken the towers on the bridge just the vertical ones not the cross hatch lines. Other than that I think we are good to go Send me that revision when you can And I will finalize the project
The skyline was more accurate in the previous logos but I like the look...refer to the picture I loaded that has blue skies the bridge and skyline in it
Oh ya!!! I like that. If you can Google "salesforce building San Francisco"and maybe make that 1 final building more unique I think we have a winner. I'm going to make that company my focus for clients this year!
OK here are some fine details I'd like to see added to this logo. Make the periods after each letter 75% smaller. Add some finer detail to the buildings in the skyline maybe some small black windows throughout the buildings or anything created you can do to break up and separate each building individually. Make the line between live your best life a little smaller And add a little space between the letter E and of letter T because it seems a little close together compared to the 1st 2 letters. One final thing bring down the bottom portion where you have BRE T maybe an 8th of an inch so there is a little more space between the other skyline and the bottom portion I just wanna stretch the over all logo slightly. Let me know if that all makes sense I vision it in my brain but it's hard to explain it in writing lol
Just a quick question, will the final design have the ability to zoom in without becoming pixelated? I want to Make sure if I ever print a very large banner or sign that it will always have sharp, crisp edges. I'm sure it will but I wanted to check with you.
Well after looking at all of them I think this is the best one with color combination. The only thing that's missing is a period after the T in B.R.E.T.
By the way I really like the way you out of the salesforce building into the skyline I'm trying to go for the most updated and accurate depiction of San Francisco I could and you nailed it and if you ever have another client looking in San Francisco I would keep that skyline in your database!
So I am definitely leaning the most towards this logo. Once we are in the finalist phase I will give you some edits I wish to see. My vision is to have a both all Black background version as well as an all White background version. With this logo you have created I would like to make the skyline white on an all black background and make the bridge grey. This logo will be on a large for sale sign and eventually have my contact info and email below it as well as my website.
I will also make business cards with the logo and plan to use shiny red foil for the B.R.E.T. and shiny grey or even silver for the bridge to make it stand out. Also our Tagline is "Live Your Best Life" So that eventually will be revised as well. Also I might want to see what other fonts you have created that are more unique. I do like how the E has been changed into more of a symbol that element I really do like. We can talk more about it after the blind phase
I just uploaded pictures of the SF skyline along with the actual bridge. I like the concept of your logo design but would want it to be more exact in the skyline and include the middle column of the bay bridge. I would also prefer it to include the Logo "Live Your Best Life". Great design otherwise!
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I have uploaded the revisions #309
about dot placement because letter T have more space if i changes it will be change all. so i do as i can.
what do you think?
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The dot next to the letter E Is further away than the other 3 dots so I'd like to move it equal distance from the letter E.
Can we also slightly thicken the towers on the bridge just the vertical ones not the cross hatch lines. Other than that I think we are good to go Send me that revision when you can And I will finalize the project
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I will also make business cards with the logo and plan to use shiny red foil for the B.R.E.T. and shiny grey or even silver for the bridge to make it stand out. Also our Tagline is "Live Your Best Life" So that eventually will be revised as well. Also I might want to see what other fonts you have created that are more unique. I do like how the E has been changed into more of a symbol that element I really do like. We can talk more about it after the blind phase
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