ok so you do not want to work any further on this then or? Id like the outline like in rank one i love the view of the vehicle but the business name is what is keeping me at a maybe .... also removing the slogan would help
Thanks for feedback, I am really appreciate and really want to make. But I must respect other designer came up with their concepts. I make this design base on your briefing in first time you start this contest. I try the best make this design, after finalist round you change your mind to make design like other designer concept, sorry I can't do that. I hope you understand this situations, because logotournament.com have rules. If designer break the rules, the worst account will be banned.
def pops more but is a bit rough on the eyes maybe the line next to detail should be white or red also maybe a brighter blue for the slogan no white border ..... idk but its a bit rough on the eyes the car still looks good just need to play with the words i think
everything below the car is not poppin for me ... and a bit harder to read maybe wittmann in Red detailing in white slogan in blue with a white boarder or brightness increased just a thought but def change the words the car looks great
I like it if you can show tires and then a white back ground option as well .... also we have to adjust for the corrected name .... maybe Wittmann or -WD- on the grill and the name Wittmann Detail or Wittmann Detailing ...
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Update proposal #133, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for reply, I will submit with frame and improve layout from his design\\
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, I am really appreciate and really want to make. But I must respect other designer came up with their concepts. I make this design base on your briefing in first time you start this contest. I try the best make this design, after finalist round you change your mind to make design like other designer concept, sorry I can't do that. I hope you understand this situations, because logotournament.com have rules. If designer break the rules, the worst account will be banned.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update with more pop up color #70 and #71, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #64 and #65, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #44, let me know your thoughts.
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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Jefry