Thanks so much for submitting. We like and dislike a few things about your designs so far.
LIKES I like the ASYLUM font mostly. The "YLUM" looks good, I just wish the S was more "block-y" instead of coming to points and I would like to see a non-italicized A.
DISLIKES Although the splat idea is a good concept (slightly close to what our plan is for this design in it's finished state), we need just a straightforward stencil. Although we like the string blowing to the side, for our finished design, we need a long straight up and down string.
The get committed font could be more 40's typewriter-like and needs a period after it. It should also be centered under ASYLUM, although it can be angled if you think it would look good... almost appearing as though it is stamped.