Hey Danez!
We really like your designs... what beautiful creativity. We do want to make some changes, but we think you are on the right track with your design aesthetic. A few things...
We are photoshopping a picture underneath the actual balloon part of the image. Therefore, we need a straightforward stencil with an empty middle so the image can be seen. It will end up looking like this balloon was stenciled on top of our photo, showing it beneath. I prefer the balloon in #10 to the one in #23.
We salute and applaud your creativity and technique in terms of incorporating the string into the S. However, we are pretty set on having a straight up and down string as in the picture. We think you could do a beautiful job incorporating one or two curls into the long string. If you look at #10 and move the logo ALL the way to the bottom of the page, make the balloon a little bigger and start it at the top, that is the dimension of how long the string should be.
ASYLUM should be a bolder thicker font. We like the distressing, but would rather it only happen within the text, not distressing the outside of it.
We really like the get committed font. Can you make the letters lowercase and put a period after get committed.
Thanks for your work! We think your designs are great!