Astoria Apotheke WalldorfLogo Design Contest

gerne wechsel ich auf die Deutsche Sprache.
Aus meiner ganz persönlichen Sicht hat mir der Entwurf des Designers von Anfang an gefallen. Mörser mit Pistill vorne Gebäude im Hintergrund.
Im Laufe des weiteren Entwicklungsprozesses hat sich für mich einfach ergeben, dass es eine gute Idee sein könnte das bestehende Logo dann ebenso um einen Hintergrund zu ergänzen, so dass es ein einheitliches Bild ergibt wenn die Logos nebeneinander stehen.

Es macht durchaus Sinn die Designer die sich bereits eingebracht haben mit einzubinden um diese Idee weiterzubringen.
Dies als separates Projekt zu sehen ist meines Érachtens nach nicht zwangsläufig notwendig - eigentlich auch ein wenig ineffizient.
Eine andere zu klärende Frage ist die zusätzliche Vergütung - die mir bewusst ist.

Die geschwungene Kurve auf der das Gebäude steht kommt aus seinem ersten Entwurf - zu finden auch in Ihrem Vorschlag.
Das Haus stark zu vereinfachen war ebenso 20 Entwürfe vor Ihrem ersten Logo da.
Er war einer der wenigen der mir nicht zusätzliche Farben als die erwähnten gebracht hat.
Die Änderung des Turms habe ich erbeten - mir persönlich gefällt der Turm aus dem Logo auf Rang 3 am besten - aktuell.

Wenn Sie glauben, dass ich unethisch handele oder nicht den Regularien entsprechend agiere stelle ich mich der Betrachtung durch eine dritte Partei.

More than once I was tempted to communicate in German(I am pretty fluent in it since I've studied Multimedia in Cologne) but I didnt want it to look like I was trying to gain sympathy.The thing that surprises and bothers me is that I see how elements from my work on the tower have miraculously transferred to another designers entries.The second thing has been mentioned already - people working on changes for the CentralApotheke logo within the AstoriaApotheke project(these are supposed to be 2 separate projects according to simple business ethics) .Instead of opening a case to remove the elements used exclusively by me during the whole contest, I would kindly suggest that you to seek advise from the person who designed your first logo(the mortar and pestle one) because hes/her work is really good.

Ich wünsche Ihnen ein schönes Wochenende.

ok thx for the answer. indeed nothing I was looking for - became adevelopment

Honestly I dont believe that working on a second logo to get ahead in the contest is something that complies with the rules here.In my professional opinion the first logo is perfect as it is because of its simplicity and clean lines and adding another symbol done in a different style does not make it better at all,it makes it busy,unbalanced and inconsistent.

Also one strength of your current 4th selection is that it will also look great as a horizontal version (icon on the left and the text next to it)

I dont know if you have noticed that in most of my designs the round handle part of the mortar and pestle mimics the round window of the building.

Here is a cleaner version of the one with the tower you like.

I find the current 1st rank way too busy ,it will lose its detail at small sizes and the outline is the same as in the logo of the Astorhaus Museum ..

These were my ideas I told the designer in the 1st place when I saw his first layout
I have the idea to leave the mortar in the foreground and change the background that should be related to the location - even if we have more locations in the future. Do u have a suggestion for the first pharmacy by changing the background?
Inspiration for the background could be:
The place before the pharmacy - called Drehscheibe
https://images.app.goo.gl/kpd2MpsztPhJbkt27
The park next to it
https://images.app.goo.gl/CRTj2yM8c3pcZHpU7
The house of the pharmacy itself
https://images.app.goo.gl/bCHy5hxWjB6CYaGi8

Rank 1 has the better CI
The designer improved the first logo as well. As a result both logos match very good if i place them aside.

tower is very nice

Nice tower but as a result of the added windows they remind me of eyes and the whole looks a lit like a face like : (

Too much detail

and pls deepblue on a white backgorund

I like that u left it open - so its not synchron - MAybe u change the perspective a little bit like in the old logo having a look from the left side so that the silhouette is not synchron

white background

Of course.

Could you do a fariation it with a white background?

nice start - right now it reminds of a bat

The upper part of the symbol will be refined.

Right direction - but the lines are too straight and it reminds me of an candle