Astoria Apotheke WalldorfLogo Design Contest

Hi are u still part of the contest? Here are the reasons for the actual ranking - and in the end there was no update anymore:
Rank 1 has the better CI
The designer improved the first logo as well. As a result both logos match very good if i place them aside.

These were my ideas I told the designer in the 1st place when I saw his first layout
I have the idea to leave the mortar in the foreground and change the background that should be related to the location - even if we have more locations in the future. Do u have a suggestion for the first pharmacy by changing the background?
Inspiration for the background could be:
The place before the pharmacy - called Drehscheibe
https://images.app.goo.gl/kpd2MpsztPhJbkt27
The park next to it
https://images.app.goo.gl/CRTj2yM8c3pcZHpU7
The house of the pharmacy itself
https://images.app.goo.gl/bCHy5hxWjB6CYaGi8

PLs remevoe the blue line inside the pistill

The cruve like in logo 102 but connected to the mortar without a straight line under teh building
lower the ankle of the pistill
no leave in or beside the mortar

compare to the original ist completly round

thinner

Change the ankle

Much more what i am looking for
I can markup - didnt know....

could you place a cirved line under the building instead of a straight line
The actual mortar is round. Maybe you can combine the round mortar curve with the a curve under the building?

This one is still the best version. Could you
1) do it all in blue
2) remove the red quadrat
3) use thiner lines
4) tilt the mortar to a ankle like the original - now its too steep

Better - stick with the writing of the pharmacy like here. A little bit more space between astoria Apotheke and Walldorf

I dont like the pot. If integrated it should be more like it is - round - elegant - easy.
The building misses the elegance as well . dont know how to describe it the best less straight, less quadrats no point on top of the builduing - Maybe a little different perspective

Maybe this is insipiring
https://www.google.com/search?q=astorhaus+walldorf&sxsrf=ALeKk03ayCehFy9F6wRcOKmZ9DkMaErI_A:1597577967723&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwj_iZHa0Z_rAhVNy6QKHWHTDPsQ_AUoAnoECBYQBA&biw=2560&bih=1298#imgrc=42wwm2QZIA2W4M

Nice combination.
Its a little bit too much a minaret - the pot could be smaller and differs too much from the other logo. The lines right and left to WALLDORF are shorter - starting at about the 3rd letter above - maybe a little thinner. leave out red

I'll do the revisions asap. Thanks.

very creative - a little bit less detail
The Sun is nice but doesnt fit
There should be a relation to the astor house the partner pharmcy or the city walldorf