Interesting... I also updated the brief -- hopefully it helps. I also like a lot your logos Fiveone, Another and Cooper & Associates... perhaps that helps to get to a taste assessment. I also mentioned working with complex gradients but not sure if that helps you are not.
Thank you for your feedback. It is greatly appreciated. I am trying to give you something unique... not just a typeface off the internet.. Will re look at the brief.
New designs based on #305 (which i have to remove) due to another designers wishes. I think that these entries are even better as the kerning and overall look in both of them is better. ##347 / #348 / #349 / #350
Hello! I like the lighter weights of your designs but I think the part I don't like is the drop in the letter A. I also feel like this logo is two separate pieces. 1) a monogram and 2) a word mark. The monogram could have both AB or just the letter A.
Ok, just ignore my comments. To be specific #348 is not working because of the way the letter A drops. I put the one I would like you to work on #79 to the top. Can you work on that? Something like #326 is what I had in mind when the mark has two parts...
Hi, for your version, please try and work on making all the letter harmonize. I've good with a serif typeface. Pay careful attention to the spacing between words and of course the kerning. Try only to submit a couple. Don't rush!