Assist for the WinLogo Design Contest

Ok, will make revision based on above comments. Thanks

I like the concept. Would like to see in colors on palette I recently updated. Can you make the tagline font a bit bolder so it's easier to read? Thank you.

I like the concept. Would like to see in colors on palette I recently updated. Can you make the tagline font a bit bolder so it's easier to read? Thank you.