Aspiring To MasteryLogo Design Contest

#1 Thanks for prompt reply - this is the first - i like the idea. Initial reaction MASTERY needs to stand out more - perhaps a deeper bronze, or the gold on purple, or purple on gold - so some variations on the theme would br good please

Thanks for the feedback, I'll try some variations ....

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#2

Thank you - the Mastery is clearer now - I would like to see one or two other ideas - I am thinking the 'tick person' has been used for other Logos and maybe very modern - maybe some intrigue, mystic (as in the secret) needs to be created!

I look forward to hearing from you.

I get it - how about something like this ?

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#3

thank you - I think we are getting there -the way to Mastery is the key to the mind

MASTERY being the main word of my business - I still feel needs to stand out more (gold on white does not do this) perhaps a variation again
thanks

A different direction ...

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#4

mmmm not sure

I have to picture what this will look like on the overall branding - on website, cards, leaflets, brochures etc

The gold writing on a white backgroung will only work on large leaflets

Not sure if I am getting used to the lightbulb!

Perhaps read through my original brief and see if any other ideas materialize

Thank you

#4

this one actually is growing on me due to its simplicity - can we see how it looks with the gold colour being a little deeper - maybe nearer to bronze

many thanks

No problem, here goes ...

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Something symbolising strategy ...

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