Entry #13 - thank you for your submissions Sandhya! I like this the most of the three.
- Comments on #13: Please review my color preferences, green is not among them. - Also, I need lowercase letters on aspire! empower! and, I'd prefer if the script was on the aspire! empower! and not on the Career Coaching Group. Can you switch them? - I like the star, but I don't like it cutting through the word...so perhaps there is another place for it. - It still feels a bit light on substance...since it's mostly text and I'm really looking for a graphic depiction that is stronger...please keep trying!
I really like #18...very nice work. Not sure if I love the sun being orange...can you play with other colors? Coral maybe? Or yellow (might be too light).
Entry #17 - nice also. Can you tell me what the graphics are that are coming out of the top? I can't figure it out? I like the look of them though... I'm not a fan of the blue thing that they are coming out of...can you remove that and play with the positioning of those objects?
Ok I though you will recognize #17. Its that same "dandelion" which we blew a lot when we were kids and wanted to fly up light and high like them. Its breaking out the walls/barriers/frame to come out and touch high.
Entry #22...ah, I get it! Nice idea! I definitely like it more w/o the barrier, but still they look misplaced, sort of "out there" now...can you play with the positioning? :)
#18...u were right. orange is better than yellow. But, can we try a coral for the sun (cross between pink and orange)? Thanks!
Hi Sandhya, Thanks again for your work! I love the sun one in Coral #24.
I still like the dandelion concept...I think you may really be on to something. I'm still not loving the positioning. I prefer more "disorder" like you have in #22 to what is in #26 (not a big fan of circles...I know, I'm strange). But, maybe bring them closer to the i as in the others. They just seem a bit far out still.
#28 - The one thing that I'm not sure I love about the "guy" in this one and the first one, is that with his arms, he sort of makes the T shape, rather than the i shape. Not sure how to fix that...because I do like it and think it's a super cool concept.
You are mighty talented, I must say! Thanks for all of your work on my project.
I have a request. I really like the one in first place right now (entry #24), but I'd also like to see the same exact thing, just with a different graphic in it's place. To tell you a little more about what I do...I help people who are struggling with a bad job search, and I give them tons of structure around their campaign. I often work with folks who have lost their job, so the outlook does not look too sunny for them, and that's the only thing that I'm struggling with re: the sun. I really love it, but perhaps you can just stick with this one for a little while and try to find another graphic just to compare.
As for entry #30 - that is exactly what I was looking for! I'm trying to sit on the idea of a dandelion...it may be too "flighty" for me, or not exude enough power, structure, rigor...but my husband loves it and it's growing on me! You don't need to do any more versions of this...this is my favorite one of the lot of dandelions. :)
Would you mind trying to use a different font for this one? I really love the one you did, but I'm thinking about something a little sleeker and less playful. Just want to see what it looks like. Can you try it with a different font? Thanks! :) Looking very forward to your updates!!
reaching the star since u are asking other than sun. But dont you think who lost their job and feel dark should be helped out to reach the light. Just my feeling. hope you wont mind.
If you like any of these graphic we can work out for font anytime.
#38 - Really love the idea of a paper airplane. That is very cool concept! Really cool. I think it's like it more if it wasn't heading straight up to the right. Can you try it by putting this in place of the sun (and forget the squiggly line)? I think that might look cool!
Sorry if I'm asking for too many changes, but I really love all of your ideas. It's very hard to choose.
#45 Love it! I'm definitely leaning toward the sun above all other designs. And, now I'm not sure about the color of the sun. Can you try maybe a super bright pastel yellow for the sun (brighter than the other one).
And I agree with you that folks should not be depressed about their job loss or career. I appreciate your feedback; keep giving it! :)
Sandhya - I think for now I'm going to stick with the whole sun theme. I keep it in first place because I definitely like it the most. Thank you! And, I love the yellow you did for #59. So, don't worry about making any other graphic changes. I like what you've done. :)
Having said that, would you be willing to just try one more thing? Try it with Aspire! Empower (capital A and E) and try to find a font that looks like Sarah Louise (sorry that I don't know what it is) in the logo toward the middle of this page. I'm just not 100% in love with the font in #59, but we are soooooo close. :)
Can you play around with the colors a bit? I'd love to see a sun that is sort of a Red/Orange color...not as pink as the other red sun, but not as yellow as this one. And, can you try the Empower in the same as Aspire? I just want to see it.
Also, and this is a STRANGE request.....but, I don't love the look of the A in this font. Is there a way to soften it a bit, but still make it go with the other letters?
I really love your submissions...Thank you for your work!
Entry #78. Great! Only request is the color on the red is not quite orange enough for me. Can you add a bit of an orange hue to it? What I'm looking for is more peach color, not fuscia or pink. Thanks!
I love your work. I hate that I keep asking for changes, but I've sent this to my network and the feedback I got was that...Empower is such a powerful word, and in this font it looks to flighty.
Never feel bad to ask for changes.Its ur logo and should look the best to run for long future. Client is always god to business.:) We are here to give you what you like and feel best.
Hi there...I'm sorry that I didn't give you feedback on your latest submissions! I'd still like to go back to: #59. I still love the sun. I just don't love the fonts. Can you try aspire in another font (still handwritten/scripty), and empower in a clean cut font (sort of like many of the others). I've been getting feedback from clients that they think empower should look more powerful and less frilly.
Hi there...I'm sorry that I didn't give you feedback on your latest submissions! I'd still like to go back to: #59. I still love the sun. I just don't love the fonts. Can you try aspire in another font (still handwritten/scripty), and empower in a clean cut font (sort of like many of the others). I've been getting feedback from clients that they think empower should look more powerful and less frilly.
Hi there...I'm sorry that I didn't give you feedback on your latest submissions! I'd still like to go back to: #59. I still love the sun. I just don't love the fonts. Can you try aspire in another font (still handwritten/scripty), and empower in a clean cut font (sort of like many of the others). I've been getting feedback from clients that they think empower should look more powerful and less frilly.
Sandhya, Thank you for your submissions. I really hate to waste your time, so I'll be clear. I really didn't want any changes to the placement of any of the words. I prefer it to look like #59 where Career Coaching Group is between the two p's. Sorry about that!! I just really loved how it looks in between aspire and empower. So, that means you'll have to find a sans serif font for empower that doesn't look frilly and also has a low p. Sorry I'm so confusing!