Aspire! Empower!Logo Design Contest

My design idea
Feedback appreciated
Thanx

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some other ideaz

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#125 and #124

Thanks for joining! Definitely some interesting logos! I like the paper airplane idea a whole lot; the imagery really works with my business model. Good choice. I like these two the most.

As for suggestions: I'm not sure I like the placement of career coaching group where it is in any of the ideas. If you look at some of the other submissions, they've found a way to place it under and between the two p's.

The little guy in the 1/2 circle is not really working for me, but thanks for trying those too!

Thanx for the constructive feedback and appreciating my design idea
here are the revised versions
Thanx
Dennis

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#127 and #128
Thanks for revising. Hmm....well, I like the placement of the career coaching group, but it looks off somehow, b/c the p in aspire is so much longer than the p in empower. Don't really care for that...perhaps try changing fonts on both words?

Also, you may not have read my brief, but I don't like green. :)

another idea using the bulb with an enternace

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another idea

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Dennis....definitely spot on with the target! That is totally what I do in my business! So, I'd keep the target idea.

I'm still not digging the font choice for aspire, or the placement of the career coaching group. Check out some of the other submissions where the p's are both long and the career coaching group is in the middle.

Thanks!!!!

some other fonts

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Ok, here's what I'm thinking about your idea. Can you give me a design off of this?

ASPIRE! EMPOWER! (all caps, in the same font that Empower is in?). One can be blue, other black. I would find a TALL long font (something like arial narrow). And, instead of putting the target above it, can you find a way to use it for the O in empower?

I'd love to see that! Thanks!

Ok fine...understood, done that
have a look, feedback appreciated
Thanx
Dennis

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a little slant in the target will look good

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#175 I LOVE this!
Can you try just a slightly more yellow or more coral color in the target?

Oh, and can you change the font of career coaching group? It seems fuzzy. Hard to read. :)

Oh, and can you change the font of career coaching group? It seems fuzzy. Hard to read. :)

Also, I like the angled target in #175 a ton! The font is a just a bit too thick for me. Can you find a finer font - thinner but just as long? And, perhaps make the aspire not bolded and the empower bolded....just a thought! :)

One more thought...could we do a thin font (maybe something in CAPS but thinner, maybe more feminine font) and keep the EMPOWER in caps, but in a stronger, thicker font? Thanks so much! I really appreciate your idea. It is the MOST aligned with what I do in my business.

Thanx for the re-rankings and appreciation
Changed the font as per your suggestions
If you want revision, please do so, in my opinion the more feminine font will disturb the whole element , the thinner font i used now is itself looking more feminine. just my thought

Thanx

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Thank you! These are awesome! I do like the thinner font - #188 is my favorite. Can you just trry one with a more scripty Career Coaching Group??? I always prefer more feminine logos, but I love what you did with aspire empower, so I don't want to mess it up. And, can you give me a version of #188 with the target in yellow? (still going the same way, angled to the right)?

Thanks!!!
Laura

Whoops...didn't even notice #186! Love the blue in the target....I just prefer the target the other way. Thanks!!!

Thanx for the constructive feedback
updated the designs as suggested, yes i think the cursive font in career coaching group will look good without disturbing the main font.

Regards
Dennis

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#191 Love it so much more with a cursive font in CCG. Thanks!

I'm still not in love with the color orange/yellow in the target (looks a bit like puke to me). Can you try something a bit brighter?? Or another complementary color?

And, I like the cursive font you chose, but I don't LOVE it. I like this sort of edgy font though...with the fancy g and G. Can you just keep trying with the font? (I may end up liking this one the most, but right now I'd still like to keep looking).

Thanks soooo much!

#193 is still my favorite font for Career Coaching Group. I like #203 for target brightness (can you just make #193 the same color in the target)?

Also, do you think it would muck up the message if we put a little yellow star above the I in aspire? If you think it will look bad, let me know. Just wondering. I don't want to mess it up.

Thanks!

I am submitting both the options with the star and without star,, i think the star will make the logo very busy...i tried to minimise the effect by reducing the height of star
Your thoughts??

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slight change in yellow color

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LOVE the STAR!!!!! OMG. Totally awesome.

The font for Career Coaching Group is wrong though... I want to the one from #191.

I like the colors of #205

With those changes, I think it will be perfect. :)

Actually, can you try a few more handwritten fonts? I'm not sure I've found the one I like the most yet for Career Coaching Group. Everything else is fabulous!!!

some new fonts, specially searched for you
and the design with the font you liked

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Ok, #191 and #214 are my favorites. I like the font for career coaching group in #191 and the rest of #214. I think that the fonts may be the same, but the one in #191 seems a bit lighter (not as bolded) and a little bit spaced out a bit more. Can you flip them?

Also, can you just try it with Career Strategy Group instead of Career Coaching Group? Thanks!! I'm almost ready...I hope you are awake by you!
Laura

submitted the changed design
Do check

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#221 can you try to make the font on career strategy group just slightly smaller?

smaller font

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Can we just try black and yellow in the target again?

I really like Career Strategy Group (and that's more of what I do anyway). Thanks!

Can you do me a favor? Can I just see an example with a lower case font (same design, star and target) and then a regular, non-script font for the Career Strategy Group?
Thanks!!!

Also, is this in bold? Can we try to do the aspire empower not in bold?? thanks!

submitting the variations as suggested but in my view the target will become small in small letters
your views??

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@223 - I am getting very close to selecting you as the expert, but I'm just not in love with the yellow yet...can you make it more yellow, and less orange?? Thanks!!! Then, I think we'll be done (oh and the star to match).

ok fine..here are three diff. yellow colors to choose from...more yellow and less orange

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Submitting some other font variations for the tagline
Do check and these are all free fonts

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Dennis,

I like the font for Career Strategy Group from #229.
HOWEVER, please change the rest of the font back to the one in #223, with the lighter color yellow like in #229. I don't like it with the mixed upper and lower case like in the last few you've been sending.

Thank you!!
Laura

Dennis,

I wonder if you are getting these emails! I'd like the following changes and then we're done.

I like the font for Career Strategy Group from ##242.
HOWEVER, please change the rest of the ASPIRE! EMPOWER! back to UPPERCASE like in #229. Also, please make it the lighter yellow.

Thank you!!
Laura

Here are the updated designs with black and blue inner circle of target

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Hi Dennis,

You are going to win...let me just say that. The only thing is that I don't love the yellow. I don't know how I got to this color (perhaps another designer did it and got it wrong, but I don't love it). Can you just send me a few designs with a different color for the target and star. I'm sorry to do this to you, but I only get one chance at this. Just use your own color scheme and decide what goes well with the blue. Thanks!

Again, thank you!
Laura

some other colors

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Dennis,

Not sure you are getting these emails in a timely manner...I'm sorry if I'm repeating myself!

Can you please go back to #223. I don't love the other colors you've submitted, so I'll just go with this one.

You still have to change the font for Career Strategy Group (this is with the one that we are not allowed to use).

Thank you!

submitting the final one with the same yellow color and changed font

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Dennis....first off, let me say that I know you want me to finish this, but I have to LOVE my logo, and right now it isn't perfect, which is why I've extended the deadline...to make a few MINOR tweaks. I want to complete this as much as you do, so I'd appreciate it if you don't get upset (smile).

Can you try just a few things for me?

1. Can you insert a line separating ASPIRE! EMPOWER! and Career Strategy group.
2. Can you try it with Arial Narrow (Aspire! Empower) and Freestyle Script with the font below? I just want to see some different logos (I find the Aspire Empower font to be so thick and IN YOUR FACE). So, I'm looking for something a bit more narrow.
3. Can you make the Aspire! Empower! Black, and the Career Strategy Group blue (you may have to make the blue slightly darker so it can be read).
4. Can you do the target in black and blue?
5. And, please get rid of the STAR. I got bad feedback on it, just like you said I would. :)

Thank you (sigh, honestly it's almost over).

Laura

So, --

Sorry, I meant to say in #2 different FONTS (not logos)....thanks!

Thanx for the feedback, i too trying to give you the perfect solution for your business logo.
here are some revisions based on the feedback with Arial Narrow font (which is not narrow actually) and freestyle script

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with my choice of font (more narrow) and the script font
Hope these changes are in line to what you suggested

waiting to hear from you

Regards

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