Congratulations for being the only designer to try something that's not a star. I appreciate the effort which is why I've got you so highly ranked right now. It's also such a clean design.
My problem with it is that it looks more like an accountant or an insurance company that someone who comes in a works with the people in your organization to do planning.
The designs that are ahead of you have got the graphic meaning something that relates to that business.
I'm wondering if you though of any variations of the idea that will generate some more meaning in that way.
Thank you for the feedback. I entered a new version, and I have a couple of more ideas that I would like to put into use but I am not sure I have the time today. Hope I get a top 5 spot to keep designing for this one.