Asheville And BeyondLogo Design Contest

Hi,
This is my first submission,
feedback will be appreciate.

Warm regards,
kodoqijo

(This comment references Entry #2)

#2 This is my first request for logo so forgive if I am not understanding protocol. This is my favorite and yet still not quite there. Please read my request from yesterday about higher mountains, softer orange, etc.. I also posted another photograph from night time for ideas about colors of indigo, etc. thank you

Thanks for your feedback,
i'm sorry i have to submit the revision now, because i didn't get the notification on your feedback. Here is my revision.

Regards,
kodoqijo

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Somewhere between the two lies the answer. please look at the photo I uploaded to get the idea of the mountains, these are more like pyramids which do not reflect where we live. also the city line is bit more distinctive. I like your ideas the best

thanks and PLEASE keep submitting. I also added WordMark to the mix for logos...

Hi,
thanks for your feedback again, sure! i will submit more to get me closer to right direction.
Here my revision for the higher mountain. i use my first submission color scheme into this graphic, but also trying get the indigo. I also try to make the wordmark by adding 'road' into the "o" in beyond but still trying find the better way. Hope to hear your opinion again.

Regards,
kodoqijo

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Alternative color with the taupe as main.

(This comment references Entry #13)

loving the revisions. I have an email in to my business partner to review your submissions as well, #12 is new fav, I realize the many colors will create a printers nightmare (or for my bank acct) but I like it and would love to see the original orange appear in the skylight.
the mountains are now perfect in 12 and 13!

Hi, Thanks!
This is revision with original orange in skylight,
i also remove the road in letter "o", because i think it is better without it.
Please let me know if you need anything else, meanwhile i try to make another alternative.

Thanks,
kodoqijo

(This comment references Entry #17)

Hi again, just for you to see, i try to make an solution for to many color, so i made it in mono color for alternative with hatch.

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#19 I see where you are going with that - ease of print or b/w or grayscale - thanks for that.
I like your work best, can you try a WordMark type as well? I'd love to see what you can do.
I finally see the road in the letter "O" that you mentioned and while very clever I believe will be missed by most. Perhaps in a WordMark logo that would be better.

so other thoughts a way to bring some softer definition to the trees below the city line? and or another color variation mixing 11 and 17?

this is my first entry attempt with wordmark logo in dark background first. The "S" shape road goes to the asheville silhouette.

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I love #34 and the "S" being the road. Subtle but immediate for me.

Could you play a bit more with #34? particularly the mountains beyond the city? I really like this and want to see it tweaked.

Hi,
I'm just trying my new idea and it would be great to hear your comment.

Regards,
Kodoqijo

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I'm sorry i've just read your June 10th comments on #34 after i submit the #40,
will do it! Thanks!

kodoqijo - # 40 not so much. looking forward to your other ideas...

ok, i will try my best!

Hi,
This is tweaked version of #34 with same color used,
In this revision i make the road (letter S) more noticeable as road as also as letter S, the city framed so it create the negative space as city and the lettering.
Looking forward for your feedback again,

Regards,
Kodoqijo

(This comment references Entry #41)

I have asked my friends and cohorts to assist in the last hours. thanks for everything.

You will win this in one hour and I want to work with you after the contest to tweak this design for use on blog head, website, business card and for sale signage if you would. my contact email is Ron@AshevilleAndBeyond.com

thank you very much.

Thanks! it will be my honour.