Asheville And BeyondLogo Design Contest

This has much promise, can you pull back from a closeup and get more of an overall skyline? enlarge "and beyond" or reduce "asheville" a bit?

thank you

Hi, thanks for your comments. I will make a changes according to your references.

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Wow, I nearly did not know it was you again. I added WordMark type logo to the mix as well. Here are my thoughts as you obviously pick up things quickly. Consider bringing the city hall (from #5) in the 2 new items more toward center. It feels too far left. It is a Landmark for our town. Much like you showcased it at first. I like the river/ or road at the bottom - a tense bit larger perhaps. softer blues on outside, touch of taupe'

thanks very much

Hi, thank you for your comment & ranking my design. I'll make changes as you've requested.

Thanks,
HazelJane